It was an interesting experience to write this essay on gaming literacy. As for how I'm going to revise it, I am certainly going to address the issues pointed out by both the professor and my classmates as far as tigthening my focus and starting with a more informative introduction. After the discussion in class about privacy in reference to particpants in interviews, I've revised my posted draft already so it doesn't contain anything it shouldn't.
All in all, it shouldn't be too hard to correct. I made the mistake of going through line by line and analyzing every part of it, even the parts that were repetitive in pattern. The benefit of doing it the way I did is that I can probably just take out the parts that don't need to be there and tighten up the areas that remain.
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